isnt this story the saddest thing you have ever hered?

once apon a time there was a girl….she was walking down the street when she saw a man who had gotten in a fight. She walked over verry slowly asnmd asked him if he was ok, he told her that he would be fine and then she saw blood trikle down his face and tryed to hand him a napkin but he said he would just lik the blood away, she laughed and said but its on your face. He smiled and said your cute when you laugh. Then he began to walk away….and with all her courage she said im Miko and he pointed to the moon, she asked so your name is tsuki like the moon? and he said its yue in chinese as he walked away. The next day she was in her "fiance’s" car when she saw him again and imidiatly she said STOP THE CAR im getting out hear and she ran after the man, but she lost him until he cought her as if he was trying to ubduct her, but he soon relized it was her "miko?" he said as he took his hand off of her mouth and then she saw it "you were wearing that same earing yesterday" she said to him, "yeah it was my sisters….she died of lung cancer when she was 8" she felt for him and they were seperated again, but the next night she saw him and they walked for a while and then he fell to the ground she ran to him "Yue, YUE! YUUUUEE!!??" she said as she inhed closer and closer to him and then he kissed her "scare you?..ha ha ha…was that your first kiss? well i can deal with that" he said as he realized she was running away, he ran after her "miko whats wrong?" she cryed "my mom colaped and never got up" he felt teribles he grabed her and held her tight "dont cry" he said and she replyed by saying im not crying….as she rolled her eyes he it began to rain and he asked her to co in side to his home they sat in the house for a while as he showered off she began to wander around she happend apon a cactus, he said it was his mothers and she told him it was dieing. The next night she came to his house again and fonud a note in the cactus, "dear little sister..im sorry i havent already done it i plan on doing it tonight" as he came up behind her with a nife she turned to him "you lier!! you evil lier!!" he began to tell her why he palned to kill her it tuned out that her father a doctor had told his family that his sister only had a cold and that she died from lung cancer. and he was gonig to kill herin revenge…but he closer they got the more he tryed to hate her but in the end he ended up loving her..and that he wanted to be with her. so they ended up living together and really loving eachother…the room they lived in didnt have a heater so they had to huddle together for warmth…but she didnt mind and neither did he….later that hyear he was walking and he began to bleed but he ignored it as it was verry early and he wanted to see the sunrise of the new year with his girl….but as they watched it he died and she looked to him "are you sleeping?" but she knew he had died and that was the last time he would be seeing a sunrise and the last birthday he would be having…she got back to the rrom and saw the cactus had another note in it but that time to her..the note read "dear miko if you are reading this i have already left the earth and wont be coming back…i have died form a heart conditon and that night i had "faked" the seisure was reall but small…i love you and this cactus is me….keep it safe…..i love you"

the end….

sorry my english is really bad….

aww
that is sad

8 Responses to “isnt this story the saddest thing you have ever hered?”

  1. BigFoot's Magical Mushrooms on March 5th, 2010 at 1:20 pm

    Any waffles involved?
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  2. basketball15capecod on March 5th, 2010 at 2:10 pm

    aww…. so sadddddddddd.
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  3. xƒirst ai∂x on March 5th, 2010 at 2:40 pm

    Awww :’(
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  4. Wow that IS sad…. It was really confusing the way you wrote it and I could hardly understand some parts but that is a very sad story.
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  5. there were so many grammar mistakes i barely understood it.

    but yes it was… sad.
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  6. no that’s not the saddest story ive ever heard. not even top 5. seriously id rank the notebook as "sadder" than that.
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  7. jesus christ. that was a challenge.
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  8. aww
    that is sad
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